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Post by Kelleigh on Jul 24, 2006 22:04:27 GMT -5
© Some say love's full of pain some say it's full of bliss through all that's happened I dont know what to classify this
I tell you i love you my heart bleeding yet you refuse to believe it leave me constantly pleading
You're falling fast and you don't know what to do it's a daily battle trying to break through but you've lived life all alone say I don't need anyone, not even you
Love's a constant rollar coaster i'm in for the ride a never ending merry-go-round don't you realize everything's right when you're by my side?
I don't know how to prove to you that you are the one good thing in my life the only person who can make me laugh when i don't even want to smile the harsh words you say stab me like a thousand knives yet here i stay all the while
I just want to break through that stone wall to touch your heart just once to watch the barrier around you crumble and fall am i asking for too much?
You are my everything you bring out my better half you can deny all you want yea,go ahead and laugh
But the love i have for you is stronger than you know i'll never give up on you one day i'll have your true self show bring out the guy you once knew
So push away all you want fight with no mercy, head no slack just always remember i'll fight right back
I love you with all my heart despite what you put me through and no matter what happens i'll always be in love with you©
Nyah I was bored ;D Comments would be nice....And yes it's a poem >____>
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Post by Iroppoi Ame <3 on Jul 24, 2006 23:05:23 GMT -5
Very dark. But very good. Great Job Kerii <3
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Post by Iroppoi Meg <3 on Jul 25, 2006 11:18:22 GMT -5
Mhmm, I like it, but I agree with Ame. Dark.
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Post by Kayla on Jul 27, 2006 4:02:33 GMT -5
its very dark...but its very good so GOOD JOB!
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Post by Danielle on Jul 27, 2006 16:19:35 GMT -5
It is dark, but it is a very soulful poem. You are talented Kelli! You must write more.
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